Non-Story Note: This thread is closed to myself, Britt the Writer. However, it does contain many characters, ideas, locations and themes from other Writers across NeS history. I often take minor or abandoned material and weave new life into them in Clear and the Broken. If you wish to see new life to one of your old, forgotten characters, feel free to send me a private message.
This Story is a spin-off from Neverending Story 3. It exclusively follows Clear, a salmitton and last of the Martians. Humans long ago colonised the planet and through a process of racial prejudice, human exceptionalism and incidental disease, the Martians were wiped out, save for one. Clear had been spared as a child as she was aboard the abandoned and ancient spaceship, The Hopeful. Mars is now a wild, lawless landscape where pockets of the planet are in the iron grip of mega-corporations. The first Story was Clear and the Hopeless, which ended with Clear stranded on her homeworld of Mars and witnessed the loss of her ship, The Hopeful. Now, she still has another ship named The Unbroken, but has chosen to remain on Mars. Yet, as the last of her kind, there are many that will pay for her to be captured. For more details on past events, check out the summary, or read the whole Story, on our wiki.
After an hour of staring into a pair of grimy, old binoculars, Clear started rubbing her eyes. The sky above her was a haze of pink and blue, typical for midday Mars, but there was no wind blowing on the Red Plains. Her head was hot and sweat gathered on her forehead. She adjusted her long, thick plait to expose her neck to the air – little good it did.
Much longer and she was going to need a bathroom break. She didn’t want to be caught with her literal pants down.
Her view settled back to the mine. She hated it when the people hunting her were late.
She suspected that they were out there, somewhere, watching the mine, just as she was. She imagined them, prone as she was and staring continuously at the same spot. Clear gave a cursory visual sweep of the landscape, but her binoculars were cheap, old rubbish even if they had been clean.
The sign on the mine read ‘Liger Electronics’ – at least she assumed it did, as ‘Liger blurry-elect-blurry’ didn’t seem right – and she remembered the company had sold some kind of demonic kid’s toys years and years ago, before they were forced to close down. Like most of the old mines, plants and manufactories on Mars.
Then, she saw the tell-tale sign of an approaching vehicle. It seemed to be a hovercraft of some kind, judging by the way the dust blew upwards in a great cloud rather than blasted sideways by the presence of wheels. When it got closer, the details of it materialised through the red mist. It was a bright yellow vehicle, sleek, long and open-topped. She quickly realised it was a rental, probably from Saffron 5. They must have driven a long way, they wouldn’t have been permitted to have it brought via orbit.
She looked to the rifle at her side, just in case she needed it. It wasn’t very accurate, but she had been able to snag a high-energy pack so accuracy wasn’t an issue – aim in the general direction and let loose the hounds of massive damage.
The hovercraft slid to a stop and a single figure emerged from it. Clear was surprised.
Her information told her that the Crystal Bounty Hunters – which she thought was the dumbest name in the history of dumb bounty hunter names – were a relatively large group that was still going through a period of expansion. Yet, she saw just one besuited man when a whole team ought to be scurrying around. She chewed her lip. They probably suspected a trap. Right as they were, it unsettled Clear. Most bounty hunters she had experienced were sloppy, overconfident adventurers that lived for the big payday. This level of caution meant the group was taking this bounty seriously. She wondered just what price her freedom was going for these days…
Through the binoculars she saw power armour and groaned. It explained the caution. It was the zealot.
Altus Grant. His power armour was dark turquoise, but the boots were accented black, as was the helmet. Though his face was now concealed by a visor, Clear had already seen the man from his identity profile recorded by The Republic. She still had friends in high places, and accessing police security files was easily done. She assumed not all of the bounty hunters in this outfit would have crossed The Republic, so wouldn’t have profiles, but this one, at least, had.
She watched as the former military commando held his rifle in an aggressive stance and made for the mine. She was sure, now, that the rest of his group were nearby, in a similar dugout to her own. He would be using that helmet to communicate with them. She did have certain scanners that might hack into those frequencies, but she had left them back at the shack.
From the level his rifle was held, he would easily make a headshot. That was surprising and confusing. She couldn’t imagine she was worth much dead. Her existence, her very life itself, was the only worth she had. Either someone wanted to mount her corpse in an exhibit, or Altus Grant was packing less-than-lethal ammo in his rifle. The armour he wore was standard issue for his former military corps, the Army of Light, but the rifle was definitely a later acquisition he must have made.
The personality profile in his file warned her of his tenacity and his zealous nature, both qualities he would have needed in his life as a warrior of the WriterGod. Clear barely understood religious, or belief in imaginary people at the best of times, but the willingness to condemn others for believing in their own imaginary friends and not yours was a brain hurdle she could never make. But, from what limited knowledge was available on the Army of Light, these men - and they were always male as per their patriarchy – went beyond prejudicial murder and entered into something more like sacrifice.
Clear searched his armour until she saw the ‘Angel Core’ fitted into a cavity on the spine of the armour. From that core came a whole lot of supernatural power, well beyond any human, or salmitton like herself, could achieve. This was not an alien concept to Clear, she had met gods – so they claimed – but the mechanism itself was abhorrent to her. The Angel Core used the very life essence of the divine creatures that followed rival deities to the Army of Light. The core absorbed a defeated angel and they were trapped within that core and used by the armour, like a battery. How ‘alive’ those divine creatures were, once trapped, Clear didn’t know, but she certainly hoped they were very dead. For their sakes.
Not being a divine entity, Clear, at the very least, wouldn’t be absorbed into such a canister. She was the last of the Martians, and that meant she was worth a lot to collectors, museums and biologists. Altus Grant didn’t want her for himself, he wanted her for the money. Why he left the Army of Light, she didn’t know, it wasn’t in his file, but it evidently wasn’t to seek a more leisurely lifestyle.
Now, Altus Grant was at the front of the mine. Clear grit her teeth.
Just a few steps in…
But he stood there. Paused, stock still. Clear’s finger itched. She held the detonator in her hand. And then he started to back away. She spat a curse and leapt to her feet. Her finger slapped the trigger.
She dropped from the short cliff she had positioned herself on, hearing the explosion behind her. She didn’t bother to check the damage. Even if he had gone right in and taken the full blast, Clear supposed the power armour stood a good chance of withstanding it, at least enough for Garnt’s survival. As far from the blast as he was, at most she hoped it would cause enough confusion to aid her escape.
She straddled the seat of her motorcycle. The oversized wheels were off-road tires that were specially made for the red dust of Martian plains. She might hate the mega-corporations for exploiting her planet, but she would get her dues from them somehow. And now it was their Martian adaptability tech.
The bike roared and the dust kicked up behind her vehicle and she then raced away from the scene. She would have to hope that Grant’s cohorts, wherever they were hiding, wouldn’t get a good look at her as she fled. She did, however, have an ample head start on them and they had no idea where her true home was – only the false lead she planted on the Martian network about the mine.
Home for now. She would have to plan a new counteroffensive.
This Story is a spin-off from Neverending Story 3. It exclusively follows Clear, a salmitton and last of the Martians. Humans long ago colonised the planet and through a process of racial prejudice, human exceptionalism and incidental disease, the Martians were wiped out, save for one. Clear had been spared as a child as she was aboard the abandoned and ancient spaceship, The Hopeful. Mars is now a wild, lawless landscape where pockets of the planet are in the iron grip of mega-corporations. The first Story was Clear and the Hopeless, which ended with Clear stranded on her homeworld of Mars and witnessed the loss of her ship, The Hopeful. Now, she still has another ship named The Unbroken, but has chosen to remain on Mars. Yet, as the last of her kind, there are many that will pay for her to be captured. For more details on past events, check out the summary, or read the whole Story, on our wiki.
After an hour of staring into a pair of grimy, old binoculars, Clear started rubbing her eyes. The sky above her was a haze of pink and blue, typical for midday Mars, but there was no wind blowing on the Red Plains. Her head was hot and sweat gathered on her forehead. She adjusted her long, thick plait to expose her neck to the air – little good it did.
Much longer and she was going to need a bathroom break. She didn’t want to be caught with her literal pants down.
Her view settled back to the mine. She hated it when the people hunting her were late.
She suspected that they were out there, somewhere, watching the mine, just as she was. She imagined them, prone as she was and staring continuously at the same spot. Clear gave a cursory visual sweep of the landscape, but her binoculars were cheap, old rubbish even if they had been clean.
The sign on the mine read ‘Liger Electronics’ – at least she assumed it did, as ‘Liger blurry-elect-blurry’ didn’t seem right – and she remembered the company had sold some kind of demonic kid’s toys years and years ago, before they were forced to close down. Like most of the old mines, plants and manufactories on Mars.
Then, she saw the tell-tale sign of an approaching vehicle. It seemed to be a hovercraft of some kind, judging by the way the dust blew upwards in a great cloud rather than blasted sideways by the presence of wheels. When it got closer, the details of it materialised through the red mist. It was a bright yellow vehicle, sleek, long and open-topped. She quickly realised it was a rental, probably from Saffron 5. They must have driven a long way, they wouldn’t have been permitted to have it brought via orbit.
She looked to the rifle at her side, just in case she needed it. It wasn’t very accurate, but she had been able to snag a high-energy pack so accuracy wasn’t an issue – aim in the general direction and let loose the hounds of massive damage.
The hovercraft slid to a stop and a single figure emerged from it. Clear was surprised.
Her information told her that the Crystal Bounty Hunters – which she thought was the dumbest name in the history of dumb bounty hunter names – were a relatively large group that was still going through a period of expansion. Yet, she saw just one besuited man when a whole team ought to be scurrying around. She chewed her lip. They probably suspected a trap. Right as they were, it unsettled Clear. Most bounty hunters she had experienced were sloppy, overconfident adventurers that lived for the big payday. This level of caution meant the group was taking this bounty seriously. She wondered just what price her freedom was going for these days…
Through the binoculars she saw power armour and groaned. It explained the caution. It was the zealot.
Altus Grant. His power armour was dark turquoise, but the boots were accented black, as was the helmet. Though his face was now concealed by a visor, Clear had already seen the man from his identity profile recorded by The Republic. She still had friends in high places, and accessing police security files was easily done. She assumed not all of the bounty hunters in this outfit would have crossed The Republic, so wouldn’t have profiles, but this one, at least, had.
She watched as the former military commando held his rifle in an aggressive stance and made for the mine. She was sure, now, that the rest of his group were nearby, in a similar dugout to her own. He would be using that helmet to communicate with them. She did have certain scanners that might hack into those frequencies, but she had left them back at the shack.
From the level his rifle was held, he would easily make a headshot. That was surprising and confusing. She couldn’t imagine she was worth much dead. Her existence, her very life itself, was the only worth she had. Either someone wanted to mount her corpse in an exhibit, or Altus Grant was packing less-than-lethal ammo in his rifle. The armour he wore was standard issue for his former military corps, the Army of Light, but the rifle was definitely a later acquisition he must have made.
The personality profile in his file warned her of his tenacity and his zealous nature, both qualities he would have needed in his life as a warrior of the WriterGod. Clear barely understood religious, or belief in imaginary people at the best of times, but the willingness to condemn others for believing in their own imaginary friends and not yours was a brain hurdle she could never make. But, from what limited knowledge was available on the Army of Light, these men - and they were always male as per their patriarchy – went beyond prejudicial murder and entered into something more like sacrifice.
Clear searched his armour until she saw the ‘Angel Core’ fitted into a cavity on the spine of the armour. From that core came a whole lot of supernatural power, well beyond any human, or salmitton like herself, could achieve. This was not an alien concept to Clear, she had met gods – so they claimed – but the mechanism itself was abhorrent to her. The Angel Core used the very life essence of the divine creatures that followed rival deities to the Army of Light. The core absorbed a defeated angel and they were trapped within that core and used by the armour, like a battery. How ‘alive’ those divine creatures were, once trapped, Clear didn’t know, but she certainly hoped they were very dead. For their sakes.
Not being a divine entity, Clear, at the very least, wouldn’t be absorbed into such a canister. She was the last of the Martians, and that meant she was worth a lot to collectors, museums and biologists. Altus Grant didn’t want her for himself, he wanted her for the money. Why he left the Army of Light, she didn’t know, it wasn’t in his file, but it evidently wasn’t to seek a more leisurely lifestyle.
Now, Altus Grant was at the front of the mine. Clear grit her teeth.
Just a few steps in…
But he stood there. Paused, stock still. Clear’s finger itched. She held the detonator in her hand. And then he started to back away. She spat a curse and leapt to her feet. Her finger slapped the trigger.
She dropped from the short cliff she had positioned herself on, hearing the explosion behind her. She didn’t bother to check the damage. Even if he had gone right in and taken the full blast, Clear supposed the power armour stood a good chance of withstanding it, at least enough for Garnt’s survival. As far from the blast as he was, at most she hoped it would cause enough confusion to aid her escape.
She straddled the seat of her motorcycle. The oversized wheels were off-road tires that were specially made for the red dust of Martian plains. She might hate the mega-corporations for exploiting her planet, but she would get her dues from them somehow. And now it was their Martian adaptability tech.
The bike roared and the dust kicked up behind her vehicle and she then raced away from the scene. She would have to hope that Grant’s cohorts, wherever they were hiding, wouldn’t get a good look at her as she fled. She did, however, have an ample head start on them and they had no idea where her true home was – only the false lead she planted on the Martian network about the mine.
Home for now. She would have to plan a new counteroffensive.
